Poor Imp

"What the bloody - !" What would you say were Death to knock at your door?

...That would mean something was wrong. Perfect, right? Ha - not lying; 'can't lie about, ah, what you don't remember. Honest. -Tov -- What you recall most vividly about your ...

"I'll just step off the pavement into oncoming traffic, thanks..." What would you say were you to find any one of your characters at the table one tea-time?

You know, DD, that we're all waiting persistently and pleasantly to assist you with the CofW&D - assistance in the form of well-deserved encouragement and reams of endless critiques. ^_~ ...

Never lie. Honest. Cross my heart, right? Er, hey...if I lied, I wouldn't be telling the truth. ...That's true. -Tov I don't, don't really. Tov lies enough for half the ...

Birds. Ha - kidding, right? Hey, drunk drifters in the res, see birds all the time. Probably. Like Piers sees hope, da? -Tov But there aren't any birds in the ...

Hello again, Gyr. ^_^ ( over the re-draft ) DD has hit the most points on Mattira, even in the redraft. But to reiterate from a different perspective - it ...

Er, sounds? Hey - if I repeat them some bloody drunk's going to think I mean it, right? I'd prefer not to have a broken nose. -Tov Comp.'s buzzing. Vande's ...

Moved then. ^_^

Hello Anna; welcome to YWS! This is, actually, the forum for introducing yourself...and I assume you're not a pineapple or a fellow greeting one. ^_~ If you'd like, I can ...

Firstly, Jig, this was solidly chilling - a heavy, consistent sense of its frame like the painting. Once you start reading, you're in. There can't be a much better definition ...

Hello Gyr!... No line by line from the Imp at present for various reasons - though highest on the list would be time constraint. ^_^ Rather, I'm going to go ...

Krisha Note: Thanks to dear DD for remarks and brushings-up of this. With any luck, Crysi's will be next. She's the one I owe Tov's continued existence to. ^_~ (He ...

Don't like? Er, hell - I'm short. Bloody sucks. -Tov -- What's the tightest corner you've ever been in?

One more remark here that 1) does not directly apply to the piece of writing or 2) attempt to clarify the meaning of a given critique without sinking to the ...